My student’s best writing

A few weeks ago I gave my students writing assignment and I promised them to publish the best writing in class in my blog. They were supposed to make a comparison and contrast essay and here are two of the best :

The best writing of my diploma 4 students :

Name : Wahyuni Silvia

Upik Abu and Laura

Have you ever watched the telecinema Upik Abu and Laura? If you have, I believe you must be familiar with character Opi and Laura. The purpose of this essay is to compare and contrast the differences between Opi and Laura. The three main differences are character, family and livestyle.

Opi’s characters are diligent, smart, supple, sociable, friendly, honest, clever, careful and a simple girls. Her characters make people like her and happy to be associated with her. Whereas Laura’s characters are in the opposite of Opi. Laura’s characters are lazy, not really smart, glamour, conceited, lie, careless, and a loose girls. Her characters make people dislike to be associated with her.

Opi is an orphan, because her parents has been died. And now, she lives only with her brother and some other homeless child. Besides that, Laura has mother and father who can spoil her. She also has some assistants who always obeys her.

Other differences is live style. Opi’s life is very moderate. She lives in a small wood house. She works as cleaning service in the company where she continues her education. She does that to help her family. Whereas Laura’s lives in a wealthy condition. She can continues her education without working. She can’t respect other people.

In conclusion, Opi and Laura have many differences are character, family and live style. But actually, they are good people. Eventhough coming from a different family background.

The best writing of my diploma 3 student :

Name : Ali Hasan

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